I’m still working on chapter 3…My brain produced a new plot element that has to be included in chapter 3. This called for a re-write…after an existential melt-down…forgive my stating of the obvious, won’t you?
It’s been tough…this adventure to the garden isle. I’m having a hard time finding my rhythm. Especially with regard to writing time (the time I use to write, not time that I’m writing…I don’t write time, I just act like I do…I’m aware). I was telling my friend that this was the hardest button to swallow. He said it was worse than I thought because now I’m mixing metaphors. He was right. It is rare when Matt is wrong on such.
So read the first 2 chapters and comment. I will be using the comments for editing when I write the second draft for publishing. We are gonna get through these dark days like we always do: together with liberal amounts of hyperbole and hubris…Mahalo